4 Lord Marshal, command our officers at arms SCENE II. [Exeunt. The Same. A Room in the Duke of LANCASTER'S Palace. Enter GAUNT, and Duchess of GLOSTER". 6 GAUNT. Alas! the part I had in Gloster's blood Doth more solicit me, than your exclaims, To stir against the butchers of his life. But since correction lieth in those hands, Which made the fault that we cannot correct, Put we our quarrel to the will of heaven; 66 to mark out, to point out: "Notat designatque oculis ad cædem unumquemque nostrûm." Cicero in Catilinam. STEEVENS. To design, in our author's time, signified to mark out. See Minsheu's Dict. in v. : To designe or shew by a token. Ital. Denotare, Lat. Designare." At the end of the article the reader is referred to the words "to marke, note, demonstrate, or shew." —the word is still used with this signification in Scotland. MALONE. 4 Marshal, command, &c.] The old copies-Lord Marshal; but (as Mr. Ritson observes,) the metre requires the omission I have made. It is also justified by his Majesty's repeated address to the same officer, in Scene III. STEEVENS. "Lord Marshal." Mr. Steevens, with his usual disregard of the ancient copies, omits the word Lord, forsooth to assist the metre; and he says, the omission is "justified by his Majesty's repeated address to the same officer in Sc. III." We are therefore to suppose that whatever form of address the poet has used in one scene, must be likewise employed by him in every other! The truth is, the metre is such as the poet has used in innumerable other places. MALONE. 5 Duchess of Gloster.] The Duchess of Gloster was Eleanor Bohun, widow of Duke Thomas, son of Edward III. WALPOLE. 6 the part I had-] That is, my relation of consanguinity to Gloster. HANMER. Who when he sees the hours ripe on earth, Hath love in thy old blood no living fire? Or seven fair branches springing from one root: Is hack'd down, and his summer leaves all faded, Ah, Gaunt his blood was thine; that bed, that womb, That mettle, that self-mould, that fashion'd thee, Made him a man; and though thou liv'st, and breath'st, Yet art thou slain in him: thou dost consent? Who when HE SEES-] The old copies erroneously read: "Who when they see." I have reformed the text by example of a subsequent passage, p. 20: heaven's substitute, "His deputy, anointed in his sight," &c. STEEvens. * One phial, &c.] Though all the old copies concur in the present regulation of the following lines, I would rather read :"One phial full of Edward's sacred blood " Is crack'd, and all the precious liquor spill'd; "Is hack'd down, and his summer leaves all faded. Some of the old copies in this instance, as in many others, read vaded, a mode of spelling practised by several of our ancient writers. After all, I believe the transposition to be needless. STEEVENS. 9 - thou dost CONSENT, &c.] i. e. assent. So, in St. Luke's In some large measure to thy father's death, His deputy anointed in his sight, Hath caus'd his death: the which if wrongfully, DUCH. Where then, alas! may I complain myself 1? GAUNT. To heaven, the widow's champion and defence. Gospel, xxiii. 51: "The same had not consented to the counsel and deed of them." STEEVENS. I 1 may I COMPLAIN myself?] To complain is commonly a verb neuter, but it is here used as a verb active. So, in a very scarce book entitled A Courtlie Controversie of Cupid's Cautels, &c. Translated from the French, &c. by H. W. [Henry Wotton] Gentleman, 4to. 1578: "I coulde finde no companion, eyther to comforte me, or helpe to complaine my great sorrowe." Again, p. 58: "wyth greate griefe he complained the calamitie of his countrey." Again, in The Queenes Majesties Entertainment in Suffolke and Norfolke, by Thomas Churchyard: - Cupid encountring the Queene, beganne to complayne hys state and his mothers," &c. Dryden also employs the word in the same sense in his Fables: "Gaufride, who couldst so well in rhyme complain "The death of Richard with an arrow slain." Complain myself (as Mr. M. Mason observes,) is a literal translation of the French phrase, me plaindre. STEEVENS. DUCH. Why then, I will. Farewell, old Gaunt'. Thou go'st to Coventry, there to behold Our cousin Hereford and fell Mowbray fight: Be Mowbray's sins so heavy in his bosom, GAUNT. Sister, farewell: I must to Coventry: Not with the empty hollowness, but weight : Why then, I will. Farewell, old Gaunt.] The measure of this line being clearly defective, why may we not read? 66 Why then I will. Or thus: "Why then I will. Now fare thee well, old Gaunt." Farewell, old John of Gaunt." There can be nothing ludicrous in a title by which the King has already addressed him. RITSON. Sir T. Hanmer completes the measure, by repeating the word -farewell, at the end of the line. STEEVENS. 3 A CAITIFF recreant-] Caitiff originally signified a prisoner; next a slave, from the condition of prisoners; then a scoundrel, from the qualities of a slave : Ήμισυ τῆς ἀρελης αποαίνυται δέλιον ήμαρ. JOHNSON. This just sentiment is in Homer; but the learned commentator quoting, I suppose, from memory, has compressed a couplet into a single line : Ημισυ γαρ Τ' αρετης αποαίνυται ευρύοπα Ζευς Ανερος, ευτ' αν μιν κατα δουλιον ημαρ έλησιν. Odyss. lib. xvii. v. 322. HOLT WHITE. I do not believe that caitiff in our language ever signified a prisoner. I take it to be derived, not from captiff, but from chetif, Fr. poor, miserable. TYRWHITT. I take my leave before I have begun; And what cheer there for welcome, but my groans? 5 — unfurnish'd walls,] In our ancient castles the naked stone walls were only covered with tapestry, or arras, hung upon tenter hooks, from which it was easily taken down on every removal of the family. See the preface to The Household Book of the Fifth Earl of Northumberland, begun in 1512. STEEVENS. 11 and what shall good old York there see, But empty lodgings and unfurnish'd walls, Unpeopled OFFICES, untrodden stones? And what CHEER there for welcome, but my groans?] Thus the first quarto, 1597; in those of 1598 and 1608, and in the folio, which appears to have been printed from the last mentioned quarto, hear was substituted in the fourth line for cheer; an alteration which was adopted in all the subsequent copies, till the true reading was noticed in the Appendix to my former edition. This passage furnishes an evident proof of the value of first editions; and also shows at how very early a period the revisers of Shakspeare's pieces began to tamper with his text, under the notion of improving it, or of correcting imaginary errors of the press; of which kind of temerity the edition of his Lucrece in 1616 is a very remarkable instance. Groans occurring in this passage, the reviser conceived that the word in the former part of the line where it is found, must have been hear, which gives a clear and plausible meaning; but certainly not that intended by Shakspeare. Mr. Steevens has rightly interpreted, in a preceding note, the words-unfurnish'd walls; but neither he nor any other editor has taken any notice of the word offices in this passage, which requires to be particularly explained, because it is immediately connected. with the word cheer, and shows that the original reading is the true one. |